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Lego Pizza 🍕 Delivery Fail
Do you like Pizza 🍕? The delivery boy likes Pizza a lot...But this sometimes gets him in trouble..
The special effects with the pizza dough in the air and the ketchup sauce were really difficult to make.
Enjoy🍕
Music:
Bushwick Tarantella by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/index.html?isrc=USUAN1300002
Artist: http://incompetech.com/
The special effects with the pizza dough in the air and the ketchup sauce were really difficult to make.
Enjoy🍕
Music:
Bushwick Tarantella by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/index.html?isrc=USUAN1300002
Artist: http://incompetech.com/
Production team
| brick fun park | Producer, project's creator |
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@chris_gbpThe animation is great, really comedic and fun to watch!
Gonna be honest, this is one of the better slice-of-life "Lego Pizza Delivery" films I have seen on YouTube. It's easy to take the idea and make it another formula-based "Lego Pizza Funny Fail" brickfilm, but I think this film has a lot of character to it! That makes it fun to watch and makes it stand out.
In terms of critique, I think the sound design could have been a little more polished - some of the dialogue sounds felt a little weird. I also think the pizza splatter effect would look better in Lego, kinda looked a little off-putting as clay.
Overall, though, great film!
Thanks so much for your comment! I appreciate it! It is very helpful!
Could you please tell me what sounds felt weird to you?
It would really help me for my next video
@brick fun park@chris_gbpIn terms of critique, I think the sound design could have been a little more polished - some of the dialogue sounds felt a little weird.
Could you please tell me what sounds felt weird to you?
It would really help me for my next video
Sure! So for me personally, I don't think stock dialogue/wordless dialogue works too well in most brickfilms. For me, it makes me think back to Lego Racers 2, where their version of stock dialogue left a lot of Lego fans super confused (linked as an example)
I think your characters in this film could use some verbal dialogue to really accent their interactions. The great part is that there are many brickfilmers who do voice acting (myself included!) and you could write some super easy dialogue or even just ask for reaction sounds (grunts, "oof"s, etc.) to match the characters more closely than stock sounds. Maybe give it a shot, and keep me posted on how it goes!
@chris_gbp
I think your characters in this film could use some verbal dialogue to really accent their interactions. The great part is that there are many brickfilmers who do voice acting (myself included!) and you could write some super easy dialogue or even just ask for reaction sounds (grunts, "oof"s, etc.) to match the characters more closely than stock sounds. Maybe give it a shot, and keep me posted on how it goes!
Thanks again! I will keep that in mind!
