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Lego Pizza 🍕 Delivery Fail
Added apr. 5, 2019brick fun park | Producer, project's creator |
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The animation is great, really comedic and fun to watch!
Gonna be honest, this is one of the better slice-of-life "Lego Pizza Delivery" films I have seen on YouTube. It's easy to take the idea and make it another formula-based "Lego Pizza Funny Fail" brickfilm, but I think this film has a lot of character to it! That makes it fun to watch and makes it stand out.
In terms of critique, I think the sound design could have been a little more polished - some of the dialogue sounds felt a little weird. I also think the pizza splatter effect would look better in Lego, kinda looked a little off-putting as clay.
Overall, though, great film!
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@chris_gbpThe animation is great, really comedic and fun to watch!
Gonna be honest, this is one of the better slice-of-life "Lego Pizza Delivery" films I have seen on YouTube. It's easy to take the idea and make it another formula-based "Lego Pizza Funny Fail" brickfilm, but I think this film has a lot of character to it! That makes it fun to watch and makes it stand out.
In terms of critique, I think the sound design could have been a little more polished - some of the dialogue sounds felt a little weird. I also think the pizza splatter effect would look better in Lego, kinda looked a little off-putting as clay.
Overall, though, great film!
@brick fun park@chris_gbpIn terms of critique, I think the sound design could have been a little more polished - some of the dialogue sounds felt a little weird.
Could you please tell me what sounds felt weird to you?
It would really help me for my next video![]()
@chris_gbp
I think your characters in this film could use some verbal dialogue to really accent their interactions. The great part is that there are many brickfilmers who do voice acting (myself included!) and you could write some super easy dialogue or even just ask for reaction sounds (grunts, "oof"s, etc.) to match the characters more closely than stock sounds. Maybe give it a shot, and keep me posted on how it goes!
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