The picture is a bit blurred, what kind of camera are you using? A webcam? The aspect ratio change on some plan, 16:9 / 4:3, try to fix it on the editing step by cropping your video. There is a lot of static pictures, you could use a short animation loop to make your film more dynamic. The voice acting are great, but the volume isn't normalized, you can fix that easily in your editing software 😉
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